williamshankley Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Super Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
prince_capri Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 All good things must come to an end! Well done fella! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChefRobCreations Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 damn I just sat here and read all 5 pages very well written story mate well done, now did arsene take over ??? hehe Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 a great story altogether mambaman, well done! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mambaman Posted December 2, 2007 Author Share Posted December 2, 2007 Awww thanks everyone-this final lot of feedback has been so inspiring. It was a hard thing to do to kill my main character off but it's time for FM08 so it made sense to bring a sense of finality to the proceedings. Good to see all the praise from those who have been following Jake and Ben's progress all along and also from those who have recently made themselves known to me-your support has kept me going. I'll be back..... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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