Would this 433 tactic work well

[moltres499]

I am wondering if this tactic would work, as i am fairly new to creating my own tactics, for a top European side

My main concern with the tactic is the dm and what role should be used.

Thanks

 

Edit: I have changed the focus to attacking

Edited July 3 by moltres499
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[Falahk]

Mostly, yes, there's some minor things I would change, the most notable one being to flipp it around since it would be much easier to sign players for it that way, finding four toppclass left footed wingers might be a bit problematic in the long run 

Edited July 4 by Falahk

[Andros]

i think the thing that stand out to me is the number of attack duties, especially in attack. whilst it is good to give your advanced playmaker running options, if he misses them, does he pass backwards a lot?  I would consider 1 of the forwards as a support role, perhaps the right sided one to help with the overlap.