El007 Posted January 20, 2009 Share Posted January 20, 2009 I have used FM09 but I have edited it to make carl johnson The Jamaican born 17 year old Carl Johnson headed home yet another goal in training.The whole Bristol Rovers Squad knew that they couldnt hold on to him for long,He had already made 7 caps for the U21 national side and just last week was called up theNational Squad.Things were going great for young Carl Johnson Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
viperk1 Posted January 20, 2009 Share Posted January 20, 2009 .... Please read the information file first before you start posting three stories one after the other - there is a 7 day rule in place (once you've started a story, you cannot start another one until one week has passed). Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCIAG Posted January 20, 2009 Share Posted January 20, 2009 Yes, please don't flood the forum with new stories. You'll have to wait until Monday to start another one (so this will probably be locked until then). You really should have taken viperk's advice in your other story to type it in Word and use a spellchecker, otherwise it looks careless, rushed and tacky. For example, there are capital letters in the middle of sentences, no spaces after punctuation marks, and no full stop at the end of your final sentence. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
El007 Posted January 20, 2009 Author Share Posted January 20, 2009 Obviosly when July and August came a number of top clubs wanted to secure his signature.Clubs like Everton and Blackburn where offering me 5million plus a youth player.Nothing was enough no and he scored a amazing 8 goals in 5 Pre-Season Matches.There was a bit of jealosy within the squad and a number of youth players had been bullying him,this was normal for a new kid especially one with talent so it was just thought of as friendly teasing.Boy,were we wrong... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCIAG Posted January 20, 2009 Share Posted January 20, 2009 Ahem? And btw, the grammar still needs work. Use a word processor! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terk Posted January 20, 2009 Share Posted January 20, 2009 As others have mentioned, we have a 7 day rule in operation, so this will be closed until the 27th. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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